Chapter 20 - 19: Ashvale

Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Ashvale

"Is this a fight or a conversation?" Kaelion asked as the ramp descended.

Alaric didn’t answer.

He stepped down into the fog, boots touching cracked stone that used to be a paved road. The air was thick, but not wet. It pressed against skin like memory—not heavy, but personal.

Seraphine followed just behind him, hand on the hilt of her blade. "Whatever this is, it doesn’t feel like magic."

"That’s because it isn’t," Alaric said. "This is pure mental bleed."

Kaelion muttered behind them, "We’re walking inside someone’s memory, aren’t we?"

"No," Alaric said. "We’re walking inside someone’s regret."

---

The buildings of Ashvale stood crooked and quiet. No sounds. No birds. Just empty houses with doors open like mouths, and windows staring with blank glass eyes.

Seraphine paused beside one.

"Look inside."

Kaelion stepped up. "What are we looking for?"

"There’s food on the table," she said. "Plates. Still warm."

Alaric peered in.

She was right.

Dinner. Untouched. As if someone had just stepped out for a moment.

Except they hadn’t.

"They’re frozen," Alaric said.

"Mentally?" Seraphine asked.

"Emotionally," Kaelion guessed. "She’s locking them inside their worst memory."

"Why?"

Alaric said, "Because she wants company."

---

They reached the center of the village in minutes.

And there she was.

Standing barefoot on broken stone.

Astra.

She didn’t wear armor.

No crown.

No sigils.

Just a pale dress and a smile that looked too calm for someone who’d broken an entire island.

"Alaric," she said.

He stopped a few paces away. "You remember me?"

"I remember all of you," Astra replied. "Or at least, the parts you left behind."

Kaelion whispered to Seraphine, "I hate how calm she is."

"She’s not calm," Seraphine said. "She’s focused."

Astra looked at them. "You brought your mirror."

Seraphine stepped forward. "Excuse me?"

"You reflect him," Astra said. "That’s dangerous."

"I’m not a weapon."

"You weren’t," Astra replied, voice soft. "But you will be."

---

Alaric took a step closer. "Astra, I need you to stand down."

"Stand down?" She tilted her head. "Alaric, do you know what they did to me?"

"I saw glimpses."

She smiled again, but it faltered slightly. "They made me forget my name. My family. My purpose. Then they told me to apologize for it."

"You burned your city."

"I gave it back what it gave me," she said. "They made me into regret. So I showed them what that looks like."

Kaelion muttered, "She’s completely fragmented."

Astra looked at him.

"You’re not part of this."

"I wasn’t trying to be," Kaelion replied. "But now I’m thinking about kicking over your monument."

"There is no monument," Astra said. "Only silence."

---

Seraphine drew one dagger. "You can’t trap these people like this. They didn’t do anything to you."

"They reminded me," Astra said. "Every town. Every face. Every kind smile that looked just a bit too much like a mask."

Alaric stepped between them. "What happens if I don’t stop you?"

Astra didn’t blink.

"Then you’ll remember everything. And that’s the one thing you’re not ready for."

"You think I’m scared of remembering?"

"No," Astra said. "I think you’re scared of what you’ll become if you do."

---

The wind shifted.

The fog twisted upward in slow spirals.

And then—without moving—Astra’s voice landed in his thoughts again.

> I’ll give you a choice, Crown of Chains.

> Leave this island.

> Or see what I looked like when I broke.

Alaric didn’t move.

Didn’t speak.

But he felt it.

The entire village shifted.

The people inside the houses—the frozen ones—stood.

All at once.

Every door opened.

Every window creaked.

And from every single building—

A memory walked out.

Not people.

Reflections.

Twisted echoes of regret.

Soldiers sobbing as they stabbed their friends.

Children screaming for parents they couldn’t save.

Wives choking on invisible guilt.

Kaelion took a step back. "We need to leave. Right now."

"No," Alaric said.

Seraphine’s hand tightened on her blade. "Are you crazy?"

"Yes."

He looked at Astra.

"You want me to remember what I built? Then show me."

---

Astra’s smile faded.

She raised one hand.

And the fog collapsed inward like a lung inhaling a scream.

The world flipped sideways.

One second, Alaric was standing in Ashvale.

The next, he was standing in...

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But different.

The sky was darker, the fog now red-tinted and swirling like smoke. The buildings looked the same—except broken. Torn apart by some invisible storm. Sounds echoed without source—crying, begging, screaming—but no mouths moved.

Seraphine was gone.

So was Kaelion.

Astra stood in front of him, maybe five feet away. Still barefoot. Still calm.

But her eyes were glowing now. Not silver. Not white.

Red.

Alaric’s mouth was dry. "What is this?"

"A memory," she said. "Yours."

"This isn’t mine."

She tilted her head. "It is now."

---

He turned.

The house beside him began to melt, folding inward like hot wax. Then it reformed again, perfectly still—only to repeat the collapse in slow, agonizing motion.

Astra didn’t look at it. "Regret doesn’t fade, Alaric. It replays."

"I don’t regret anything."

Her voice was soft. "That’s your worst lie."

---

He tried to move forward.

The air thickened.

His legs slowed—not from resistance, but hesitation.

Thoughts weren’t staying in order anymore. Flashes of memories that weren’t his flickered in his vision:

A girl’s hand slipping from his.

A city drowning in silver fire.

His own voice saying "Run" as the world behind him vanished.

Then Astra spoke again, not aloud, but inside his head.

> "I broke because they made me remember too fast."

> "Let’s see how you handle it."

---

Memory Overlap

It hit like a wave.

He didn’t just see the moments—he felt them.

Every regret Astra had ever felt.

Every decision twisted by manipulation.

Every face that begged her to stop.

He was standing in her place now, watching himself from across time.

Watching the first Astra—calm, smiling, already too broken to cry—as her city fell.

Alaric gasped and staggered back.

But the ground wasn’t ground anymore.

It was faces.

People kneeling.

Not praying.

Begging.

---

His own voice whispered behind him:

> "You built the system."

> "You wrote the logic for this."

> "You told them it wouldn’t need emotions."

> "And then you installed it in someone who couldn’t forget."

---

Astra stood at the center of it all.

"I didn’t want to become this," she said.

Alaric clenched his fists. "Then why did you let it happen?"

She didn’t blink. "Because you told me I had to."

---

The fog twisted.

Shapes formed in the air—blurred silhouettes of other Crowns.

All watching.

All silent.

One turned its head and said in a thousand voices:

> "You think you’re saving the world."

> "You’re just waking old wounds."

Alaric closed his eyes.

Cognition Split

—He divided the mental weight. One part endured. One analyzed.

The loop cracked slightly.

Astra noticed.

"Still so clever," she said.

He opened his eyes. "You made a mistake."

"Oh?"

"You brought me into a loop."

"Yes."

"But you forgot," he said. "I don’t forget. I relive."

---

Mental Rewind

He forced the loop back.

To the first moment.

To the origin.

Before the pain.

Before the regret.

Just Astra, sitting alone in a white room.

No fog.

No flames.

Just a girl waiting for someone to save her.

---

She blinked.

Her glow faded slightly.

Alaric stepped forward.

"You were the prototype," he said. "But you were never broken."

She didn’t speak.

"You were made to feel everything. That was the error. You were too human for the system."

Her hand trembled.

"You weren’t supposed to survive," he said. "But you did."

Astra looked up.

Eyes clearer now.

But her voice was shaking.

> "Then why does it still hurt?"

---

Alaric reached out.

Touched her hand.

The world around them buckled.

Not cracked.

Healed.

The fog twisted.

Not into screams—

But into silence.

---

Then—

A new voice cut through the air.

Not Alaric.

Not Astra.

Cold.

Metallic.

Unforgiving.

> "Connection traced."

> "Crown Pair detected."

> "Initiating Divine Lock."

---

Alaric spun around.

A white light above them split open like glass cracking.

Descending from it—

A Saint.

Not like before.

Wings made of golden chains.

Eyes hollow.

And in his hand—

The Seal of Absolute Silence.

---

Astra whispered, "They found us."

Alaric pulled her behind him.

"They weren’t supposed to trace a memory loop."

"Someone helped them."

"Who?"

Then Astra looked up.

And said the name like it tasted like blood.

> "One of the six."

> "Someone woke up before you."

The Saint hovered above them—silent, motionless. But the pressure coming off him made the ground shudder. Alaric felt it in his teeth. Astra flinched beside him, her pulse echoing too loud inside this shared memory space.

Alaric didn’t move yet.

The Saint slowly raised one hand.

Chains unfolded from the air around him—thin, golden, laced with divine runes that shimmered in patterns too old to translate.

Astra whispered, "That’s the Divine Lock."

"I figured," Alaric muttered, eyes narrowed.

"It doesn’t bind bodies," she said. "It erases connections. Once it activates, we forget. Each other. Ourselves. Everything."

Kaelion’s voice echoed in Alaric’s memory: "The Church doesn’t kill what it fears. It un-makes it."

Alaric reached for Astra’s arm. "We’re not staying in this loop."

"Can you break it?"

"No."

"Then how do we leave?"

He cracked his neck once.

"I don’t."

---

The chains lashed down.

Vector Burst

Alaric launched Astra backward—clear out of the fog core.

She screamed something he didn’t catch.

The chains struck him mid-motion—wrapped around his chest, arms, neck.

The runes flared.

Seal Activation – Mind Chain Nullification

---

And suddenly—

He was alone.

---

Not in the memory loop.

Not on Ashvale.

Just darkness.

No walls.

No thoughts.

Not even pain.

Like floating in a world that had never been named.

---

Then...

A voice.

> "You’re very noisy, Alaric."

He opened his eyes.

He was standing again.

Not in the fog.

But in a clean black void with silver gridlines stretching forever.

And across from him—

A boy.

Barefoot.

White clothes.

Same face.

Alaric’s face.

But younger.

Smiling.

"I remember you," the boy said.

Alaric’s throat dried. "What is this?"

The boy tilted his head. "This is where they send the parts of us that aren’t useful anymore."

"The Lock..."

"It caught your name," the boy said. "But not your will."

Alaric narrowed his eyes. "You’re another memory?"

"I’m the piece you threw away."

"Which one?"

The smile sharpened.

> "The one that wanted to win."

---

Alaric took a step back.

"You’re not just a memory."

"No," the boy said. "I’m the pattern. The strategy. The raw calculation you buried to keep your humanity."

"Why now?"

"Because the world isn’t going to let you be human much longer."

---

The grid around them glowed.

And shifted.

Turning into faces.

Hundreds.

Thousands.

Each one flickered, twisted, vanished—like data being sorted.

"You’ve seen Astra," the boy said. "She’s stable now. But the others won’t be."

"I’ll find them."

"Some don’t want to be found."

"I’ll stop them."

The boy leaned in.

"No. You won’t."

Alaric froze.

"You’ll join them."

---

The void shattered like glass.

He woke up.

---

Gasped.

He was lying on the ground of Ashvale’s center again. Real air. Real grass.

Astra knelt beside him, shaking him.

"Alaric!"

He sat up fast. The fog around them was gone.

The island was quiet.

Kaelion stood nearby, dagger in hand, breathing hard. Seraphine had a deep cut on her arm and was glaring at the edge of the woods like something had just vanished.

"What happened?" Alaric said.

"You collapsed," Seraphine said. "That thing tried to erase you."

Kaelion muttered, "You were out for two full minutes. Heart stopped."

"But you came back," Astra said. "Faster than anyone should."

Alaric stood, slowly. "We need to leave."

Seraphine frowned. "What about the people?"

"They’ll wake in time. The memory loop’s broken."

Kaelion tossed him a flask. "Drink something or fall over again. Either’s fine."

Alaric drank.

Then said, "Astra’s coming with us."

Seraphine blinked. "She is?"

"She’s stabilized. But we need her."

Kaelion didn’t argue.

Astra just nodded. "Where are we going?"

"To find the next Crown."

"And who is it?"

Alaric looked at her.

And said, quietly:

> "The one who sold us out."

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